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    Directions: For this part, you areallowed 30 minutes to write an essay.                     

    Suppose you have twooptions upon graduation. One is to work in a state-owned business and the otherin a joint venture. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay toexplain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120 words but nomore than 180 words.

    【精彩范文】

    In the past two years of my college life, I have neverceased to think what kind of work I shall take up upon graduation. Although my ideas are not consistent, I have nowdecided to start a business of my own as my lifelong career.

    A variety of factors have led me to make this decision over other morelucrative ones. To begin with,running my own business means freedomand independence. As a person having my own business, I am free to use my own ideas and make my own decisions, a privilegenot everyone can have, even those with highly-paid positions. More importantly,I like starting my own business inthat it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catch a morning bus,no more anxiety to please a boss, no more worries about your paycheck which issteady, if not handsome.

    Nothing, not even a big salary, can equal for the satisfactionof being your own boss and a gentle peace of life.

    【参考译文】

    在过去两年的大学生活中，我一刻也没有停止过思考：我大学毕业以后要干什么工作。尽管我的想法很多，但我现在已决定，我将开创我自己的事业。

    有很多理由使我做出这个选择而不是其他较赚钱职业的决定。首先，创业意味着自由和独立。当一名创业人员我可以有自己想法的自由，有自己作决定的自由，而这个特权不是每一个人，甚至拿高薪的人都能拥有的。其次，我喜欢创业，是因为这个工作给我一份安宁。我无须每天早上去赶汽车，无须为如何讨好老板，如何不落在人家后面而焦虑不安，无须担心自己的工作收入，虽然不那么丰厚，但却十分稳定。

    没有什么东西，甚至高工资，可以抵得上自己做主人的乐趣和平静安宁的生活。

    【亮点词汇】

    cease，停止    take up，从事   

    upon graduation，毕业时    although，尽管

    consistent，连续的    lifelong，终生的

    career，职业    a variety of，很多

    factor，原因    lead to，导致    lucrative，诱惑性的

    to begin with，首先    freedom，自由    independence，独立

    privilege，特权    highly-paid position，高薪职位

    more importantly，更为重要的是   in that，由于    offer，提供

    certain，某种   peace，安静   rush，匆忙    anxiety，焦虑

    please，取悦    paycheck，收入    steady，稳定的    

    handsome，丰厚的、英俊的    big salary，高工资    equal，抵得上 satisfaction，乐趣、满足    gentle，安宁的

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