2015年湖北中医药大学专升本英语作文例析（环保绿化）

【试题分析】  作文一篇，一般要求不少于100个词。题目一般与社会息息相关，今年的题目与绿化环保有关。一般来说，作文高分有三个关键点。第一，书写规范，规范的书写可以为自己的作文加分；第二，作文开头，需要紧扣题目，用上一些好的句式与词组；第三，作文结尾，要明确自己的观点。将这三点做好就可以得到很好地分数。但是要提醒大家，要将好的句式用在开头和结尾，但是不要使用自己不熟悉的内容，如果出错的话会扣很多分数。【作文演练】

  For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the title:make our city greener,your composition should be based on the following outline: 1：城市绿色的状况 2：绿化的好处（如：清洁空气，美化城市，改善气候......） 3：怎样才能实现绿化 【参考范文】   Recent efforts toward the greening of our cities have achieved much, although the results are still far from satisfactory. In recent years many trees have been planted in the cities and much care has been taken of the planted trees. In spite of all this, the greening process is relatively slow compared with cities in many other countries. For example, the green space available on average to each Shanghai citizen is only 0.4 Mu while every Londoner has more than 20 Mu.   We can benefit much from making our cities greener by planting trees. First, trees absorb carbon dioxide to produce oxygen which is essential to the health of human beings. Second, trees and other greenery make our cities more beautiful. Third, trees can also improve the climate of the cities.   Since we can get so much from making our cities greener, we should spare no effort to do that. We should plant more trees and take better care of them. We also should not cut down the trees. In a word, we should do everything to add to the greening of our cities.

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