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的作文开头会让阅卷老师对你的作文有个良好的印象,今天就为大家总结了20句优秀开头句式,每一句都会有例句和翻译
With the rapidly growing popularity of …,the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.
句型翻译:随着……流行程度/普及程度的快速增长,我们的生活质量也被显著改变。
例句:With the rapidly growing popularity of computers in China,the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.
例句翻译:随着中国计算机的快速普及,我们的生活质量也得到了显著的改变。
2.Recently,sth./the problem of…has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.
句型翻译:最近,……(的问题)已经被带进广泛大众的视野之中/成为公众关注的焦点
例句:Recently,the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.
例句翻译:近日,失业问题已如此广泛地被公众所关注,以至于各层级的政府都将其视作第一要务列于日程之中。
3.With the development of…,more and more people come to realize that…
句型翻译:随着……的发展,越来越多的人开始意识到……
例句:With the development of high education,more and more people come to realize that knowledge plays a role of extreme importance in modern society.
例句翻译:随着高等教育的发展,越来越多的人开始意识到,知识在现代社会中扮演者一个极其重要的角色。
4.In the past few years,there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…
句型翻译:在过去的几年中,……经历了一个大繁荣时期/急速增长/下降;
例句:In the past few years,there has been a decline in the number of species.
例句翻译:在过去的几年中,物种数量经历了减少的状况。
5.It is a traditional practice to…in our society.
句型翻译:……是我们社会的传统(方式/做法)
例句:It is a traditional practice for young people to be financially dependent on their parents for anything like marriage and housing.
例句翻译:在结婚、住房等等这类事上,年轻人在经济上依赖父母,这属于一个传统做法。
6.It has long been considered only right and proper/perfectly justified to…
句型翻译:……长期以来被认为是理所应当的/完全合理的。
例句:It has long been considered only right and proper for the old to assume full responsibility for the growth of young.
例句翻译:年长者为年幼者的成长负全责,一直以来都被认为是理所应当的。
7.No one would deny that/everyone would agree that/there is no doubt that…
句型翻译:没有人会否认/每个人都会赞同……/毫无疑问……
例句:Everyone would agree that,although our age entirely overshadows all previous ages in means of obtaining knowledge,reading still takes its leading role in all senses.
例句翻译:每个人都会认同:在知识的获取上,即便我们的时代已经超过了先前任何一个时代,但是从任何意义上说,阅读都仍处于领导性地位。
8.To sb’s mind/in sb’s eyes,sth. seems/means…
句型翻译:……认为/在……眼中,……看起来/意味着……
例句:In the eyes of the public,official corruption means taking bribes. But such corruption comes in many different forms.
例句翻译:在公众的眼中,官方腐败意味着受贿。但是腐败也有许多种不同的形式。
9.Now it is widely believed that…
句型翻译:现在……被广泛相信(认为)
例句:Now it is widely believed that examinations are the best possible measure for the selection of the qualified.
例句翻译:现在,考试已被广泛认为是资格选举的最佳实现方式。
10.The birth/invention of…has made an enormous/essential difference to… But is does not mean that…
句型翻译:……的诞生/发明已给……带来巨大的/根本性 的不同,但这并不意味着……
例句:The birth of the computer has made an essential difference to the human progress. But it does not mean that this wonder dose no threat to our society.
例句翻译:计算机的诞生已经给人类发展进程带来了根本性的不同。但这并不意味着这一奇迹不会给我们的社会带来威胁。
11.Sth. has changed the way our society develops,but its bright side should not keep us from following closely its dark side.
句型翻译:……已经改变了我们社会的发展方式,但它光明的一面不应阻碍我们密切关注其黑暗的一面。
例句:The genetic engineering has changed the way our society develops,but its bright side should not keep us from following closely its dark side.
例句翻译:基因工程已经改变了我们社会的发展方式,但是它光明的一面不应成为我们密切关注其黑暗一面的阻碍。
12.What would our society be like if there were no…?
句型翻译:如果没有……我们的社会将会是怎样?
例句:What would our society be like if there were no public morals?
例句翻译:如果没有社会公德,我们的社会将会是怎样?
13.Should we put sth. above sth. else?
句型翻译:我们应该把A(的地位/重要性)置于B之上吗?
例句:Should we put intellectual development above moral education?
例句翻译:我们应当把智力发展(的重要性)置于道德教育之上吗?
14.Sth.is just the same as…/is compared to…/is like…
句型翻译:……就像(好比)……
例句:Life in the middle of marriage is often compared to wire walking. 例句翻译:婚姻中期的生活经常被比喻成走钢丝。
15.In our life,there often appears such an occasion when…/on which…
句型翻译:在我们的生活中,在……时经常会出现这样的情况。
例句:In our daily life,there often appears such an occasion when we drink success to our work in one field but,at the same time,begin to do great damage to other fields.
例句翻译:在我们的日常生活中,经常会出现这样一种情况,即我们在某一领域的工作取得了成功,但同时也对其他领域造成了巨大的损害。
16.One of the great men once said that…/There is an old saying that…
句型翻译:一位伟人曾经说过……/有这样一则谚语说……
例句:A gifted American psychologist once said that it is an illusion to believe in the Sunday-school truth—more comfort,more happiness.
例句翻译:一个一位天才的美国心理学家曾经说过,相信主日学校的真理“更舒适,更幸福”是一种错觉。
17.According to the recent survey/statistics,there is…percent of…
句型翻译:根据最近的调查/数据统计,有百分之……的……
例句:According to a recent survey made in a certain university,there are 43.8 percent of male students and 38.3 percent of female students either facing problems with nutrition or having to miss classes because of illness each term.
例句翻译:根据某大学最近的一项调查,43.8%的男生和38.3%的女生在每个学期都面临营养问题或因病缺课的情况。
18.Nowadays,a heated debate/discussion about…is under way in China. Some people believe that…,whereas others argue that…
例句翻译:现如今,中国正在进行一场关于……的激烈辩论/讨论。一些人认为……,而其他人则争论称……
例句:Nowadays,a heated debate about whether one should step forward bravely in the event of crime is under way in China.Some people believe that one should step forward bravely no matter how dangerous it is,whereas others argue that one should put his or her own safety above anything else.
例句翻译:如今,中国正在进行一场关于犯罪时是否应该勇敢前进的激烈辩论。一些人认为,无论有多危险,一个人都应该勇敢前进,而另一些人则认为,一个人应该把自己的安全置于其他任何事情之上。
19.When it comes to…,most people contend that…,but other people consider that…
句型翻译:当谈到……,大多数人主张……,但是其他人认为……
例句:When it comes to fake commodities, most people contend that people should battle against the falsehood of the fakes,but other people consider that buying fake commodities means nothing but “unlucky” which is hard to avoid.
例句翻译:当谈到假冒商品时,大多数人主张人们应该与假冒商品的虚假行为作斗争,但其他人认为购买假冒商品只意味着“不走运”,这是很难避免的。
20.There are many advantages and disadvantages in…
句型翻译:在……中有很多优点和缺点。
例句:There are many ways advantages and disadvantages in this way to exact polysaccharide.
例句翻译:这种提取多糖的方式有很多优点和缺点。
考研英语写作题型 写作是英话试卷的第三部分,分为2节,共30分。
A节:根据给定情景写一篇应用性短文,100词左右(不计标点),形式包括:私人信件、公务公函、备忘录、摘要、报告等。满分1O分。
B节:根据提示信息作文,160~200词(不计标点)。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。满分20分。
评分标准 A节应用文的评分侧重于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和用语的恰当。可在文中使用提示语中的关键词,但使用其中的词组或句子则会被扣分。 B节作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性。
高分作文A节(9~10分)、B节(17~20分)的具体要求 1.很好地完成了试题规定的任务。 2.包含所有内容要点。3.语法结构合理、词汇丰富。 4.语言自然流畅,语法错误极少。 5.有效采用多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰。 6.格式和用语恰当。 知道了考研英语作文考什么、怎么考,下面就让我们一起将通往高分作文路途上的拦路虎各个击破。 拦路虎一:文不对题 “文不对题”是考研英语写作中经常出现的问题之一,不少老师在阅卷时都遇到过这样的作文——内容充实,条理清晰,用词准确,却与题目规定的内容大相径庭,最后得分非常低。考研英语写作是非开放性的,不可以随意创作,考生要严格按照题目的要求来展开文章。因此,在写作时认真审题是第一步。审题不仅仅是要仔细读题目,还要准确地理解、提取题目中的信息点和内容,明确题目的要求。由于考试的时间有限,因此要求我们在考场上必须快速、准确地审题。这就需要我们在平时多看一些题目,只有通过练习才能在考试时熟能生巧。 平时我们可以按照下面的步骤进行审题练习: (1)看题目,划出其中的核心词汇,找出作文内容的要点以及格式要求等。(2)想一想这道题考的是什么方面的话题,应该从哪 方面展开,可以找到什么样的论据。(3)找到范文,与自己的构思进行对照、检验。对于历年考研英语的作文真题,尤其是近几年的新题,建议大家动手练一练。仅在脑海中对作文题进行构思虽然节省时间,但是很多问题只有通过完整地写作才能发现。 考试时,要为自己留下一段比较充足的时间进行审题及构思,最好简略的列一个提纲,比如一两个关键词、中文或英文,甚至是一些简单的符号、标记都行。只要能够让自己明白,起到提示自己写作思路的作用就可以了。 拦路虎二:无话可说 在写作中考生常常遇到的一大难题就是无话可说,难以下笔。造成这种情况的主要原因是平时积累少。纵观多年考研英语作文试题,我们可以发现,这些题目几乎从未涉及到偏、难、怪的话题,比如:2003年的话题:温室花朵经不起风雨;2005年的话题:养老“足球赛”;2006年的话题:偶像崇拜等等,只要考生在日常生活中能多看多想,在考试时就不会无话可说。 我们可以通过看中文的报刊来提升自己思想的深度与广度,作为写作时的论点与素材,也可以看英文文章来丰富语言。有不少人都提倡多背文章,但是背书对很多人来说并不是一件容易的事。其实要起到培养语感、积累语言素材的作用,只要多读多看就可以了。这些文章可以是你感兴趣的小短文,也可以是英文教材中的课文。在此,笔者还向大家推荐另一类材料,那就是阅读理解的题目,这些题目中的文章内容丰富,用语规范,长短也比较适宜,尤其是历年考研英语真题中的文章。通过反复阅读,不仅有益于作文,也可以帮助我们加深对阅读理解部分出题方式的感受与体会。虽然这些文章不一定要背,但是要记住,我们对文章内容及其表达方式越熟悉,在需要时它就越能为我所用。甚至在考试时,如果我们在阅读中看到好的句子,也可以把它划下来以便在写作文时借用。 当然,如果能在考前准备一些比较通用的小例子,把它记熟,对于丰富写作内容也是很有益的。但由于考研作文对文章篇幅的要求,这些例子不要太复杂,最好能够用1~2句话说清楚即可;或者就选用一些人们耳熟能详的例子,仅用简单的语言概述一下即可。 比如,在使用爱迪生发明灯丝这个人们非常熟悉的例子时,我们就不必花太多笔墨讲述故事本身,而可以直接过渡到对观点的论述:We can learn from the experience of the great inventor Thomas Edison that sometimes a series of apparent failures is really a precursor to success。 拦路虎三:结构混乱 结构混乱是写作最为忌讳的问题。有话可说是写作最基本的要求,但要写好作文则必须把话说到点子上,把意思表达的清楚明白。要做到条理清楚,就要求文章的结构合理。而只有在写作时理清思路,才能使作文结构清晰,从而方便评卷老师理解文章的层次。 文章不分段或者分段过多都是不合理的。现行的考研英语作文题目中一般会有三条要求,考生可以对应的写三段话进行回应。一篇文章一定要有开头段与结尾段。首段不要太长,要开宗明义,明确表明自己的观点。尾段的主要作用是使文章结构完整,主要为归纳或建议。文章主体部分的每一段都应该围绕一个主题来写,每一段都要有主题句,而且主题句最好是每段的首句。
1. 考研英语看图作文范例是什么
写作原文 AS Is(注意大小写) shown above, a funny hen claimed that her eggs with(that后面应该跟的是从句,从句中应包含谓语动词,建议将with改为have) no edge and the like which is the most fundamntional(拼写错误,改为fundamental)。
(作者这句话是要表达什么内容?)Simple as the drawing is, the symbolic meaning behind ti(改为it) is as deep as ocean(注意句末标点)Honesty is not only necessary, but also indepensible(拼写错误,改为indispensable)。 As the old Chinese proverb says:"Honesty is gold。
" However,in no country other than China, it has been said that, the problum(拼写错误,改为problem) of opposite the pormise(拼写错误,改为promise) more serious(句子逻辑关系不明确,改为the opposite of the original promise is more serious),and people fail to attach attention to the "gold"。 Individuals and anizations can make money, take porfits(拼写错误,改为profits) and even obtain wealth by attend promise。
To be honest can also have added (改为add) benefit of increasing one's knowledge, giving us a new perspective of outside world。 According to a survey conducted by China Acadmy(拼写错误,改为Academy)of Science(CAS),honesty can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problums(拼写错误,改为problems)as depression, stress, isolation and solitude(注意句末标点)All in all,obtain(改为obtaining,一句话中只能有一个谓语动词)the promise plays a key role in our daily life。
The unhonest(改为dishonest,表示“不诚实的”,没有unhonest一词), in view of the plexity of such issue,we must treat it socially,economically and culturally。 with(首字母大写) a proper law, an up-to-date solution, a right perspective and alert public,it will be a matter of time before the problum(拼写错误,改为problem) bees things of the past。
(最后一段缺乏逻辑关系,建议重写) 总体点评 作文能够按照写作要求来写,写作格式基本符合要求。但是文中的问题较多,比如:单词的拼写问题、语法问题、句子的逻辑关系问题等。
希望作者在后面的复习中,先不要急于写文章,从基本的入手,先积累词汇、学习基本语法、积累并模仿高分语言佳句;将重点放在语句模仿上,有空多读外文期刊,了解英语的地道表达,从而不断提高自己的写作水平。 建议作者将每周的时间做一个合理的规划,一周练习一篇作文即可,在练习这篇作文时,可先积累此方面的词汇,之后两天可查找有关方面的经典表达及例文,然后再模仿佳句,等这些都做到位时,再组织文章。
2. 谁能介绍下考研英语看图作文范例并点评呢
看图作文在英语作文中是大家普遍缺乏练习的一种类型,一个提高的方式就是看范例和点评,针对其中的错误进行自我修正。
考学生or烤家长: 写作原文 In the given picture, there are many parents standing at the gate of (outside)the examination room。 As we see, they are so worried that the sweat began (begin)to pour down their face。
In china, it is mon knowledge that the exam decides (may determine)the future of children。 Hence, it reflects the problem that the (加上current Chinese表意更完整)educational system is unreasonable。
In fact, the problem has existed for several years。 Especially in china, the examination score decides the children's development in the future。
(语法正确,但句意不合理。改为the examination score may influence children's future development。
)In a sense, the examination seems to be the only standard that chooses the talents(can be used to select talents)。 Furthermore, it is so terrible educational system (the educational system is so terrible)。
I think we must take some effective measures to solve this problem。 In my opinion, we should adopt the following measures。
On the one hand, we should reform the educational institution and establish a more flexible approach to choose the talent (select talents)。 On the other hand, parents should give up the idea that the exam is the only key to judge (measure)children's ability。
总体点评 本文立意正确,内容切题,结构完整,需注意以下问题:1、文章的立意虽然正确,且深入切题,但文章的内容不够丰富充实,原因分析不够深刻。 第二段在分析造成现象的时候提出了三点“考试决定孩子的未来”“考试是选拔人才的唯一标准”“教育制度很差”——“考试为什么会决定孩子的未来,它怎样决定了孩子的未来?”“为什么是选拔人才的唯一标准?(在现有的实情方面,因为其他方法难以实施和操作)”“教育制度很差,体现在什么方面?”2、文章内容的衔接逻辑不是很清楚,如第二段先说“考试决定未来”后说“考试是选拔人才的唯一标准”,而实际上“正因为在目前考试是选拔人才的唯一标准,所以考试在某种意义上决定了孩子的未来”。
3、文章依然存有少许汉式思维的句子,有的词组搭配不合理,应在此方面加强。多模仿一些经典佳句。
因此,建议作者以后在写作之中不要提笔就写,先列出一个大纲,把自己的思路理顺,使自己的文章逻辑清晰,通顺流畅。 参考分数(满分20分):12 英语写作水平的提升需要不断地练习,在改正错误中不断取得进步,不怕犯错误,怕明知道犯错误却不面对。
看了范文和点评,希望大家有思考,有提高。
3. 考研英语图表作文模板句,求发
高尔基曾这样说过:“写文章,开头第一句是最难的,好像音乐里的定调一样,往往要费好长时间才能找到它。因此,对于一篇文章来说,开头如何也决定了这篇文章的精彩程度,而四级作文的开头也同样重要。下面,我们来看一些精彩的考研英语段首句吧!
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1)关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to。Some people suggest that。
2)俗话说……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使今天,它在许多场合仍然使用。
There is an old saying。It is the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
3)现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today,。,which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First,。,Second,。What makes things worse is that。.
4)现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外……。
Nowadays,it is mon to。.Many people like。.because。.Besides,。.
5)任何事物都是两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has o sides and 。.is not an exception.It has both advantages and disadvantages.
6)关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为……,在他们看来,……
People's opinions about 。 vary from person to person.Some people say thatt。.To them,。.
7)人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变的越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem。.which is being more and more serious.
8)……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年轻人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
has bee a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9)……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10)根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条图形/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages/ in the chart/bar graph/line/graph, it can be seen that。.Obviously,。,but why?
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4. 考研英语作文万能模板
作文模板的话一般得分都不高,还不如自己写。很多同学提到考研英语作文痛苦不已,究竟怎样在英语作文中取得高分,让自己少走弯路?考研英语作文高分秘诀,唯“积累”二字。
1.考研英语词汇的积累:考研要求同学们掌握大纲上5500词汇,尽管不能一一掌握,但也要掌握常用词汇。大家不妨从考研历年真题入手,将真题中的考研词汇全部“消灭掉”。每碰到一个拿不准的单词,就记到本子上,查出在文章中的具体意思以及其他比较常用的释义,然后在空闲的时间,经常翻阅(有本《考研真相》真题书是直接做好的)。
2.语法的积累:英语写作中,语句对错的唯一检查标准便是语法是否正确。同学们在复习过程中,除了记住辅导班老师上课讲的语法知识外,还应该准备一本专门讲语法的书,仔细推敲里面的语法知识,要能够在脑袋里面形成一个清晰的语法结构图。考研英语写作中,如果能够出现非谓语动词、从句以及一些插入语,会为文章增色不少。
3.阅读的积累:同学们平时应该大量阅读英语美文,可以订阅一些英语报刊,摘抄美文进行背诵。注意总结一些高难句模板,在写作中时自然而然地运用几句也可以为作文加分不少。
4.练笔的积累:有些同学平时从来很少写作文,认为多记一些模板就可以了。其实,大家平时应该多练练笔,可以用英语写一些日记,一个星期至少写1到2篇的英语作文,并且经常找老师修改,纠正自己的语法错误,只有这样才能够逐渐让英语写作能力得到提高。
5.书写的积累:这是一个被很多同学所忽视的问题。由于考研为扫描后再阅卷,电脑中看起来,要比在试卷上的更潦草,所以大家的书写非常重要,漂亮的英语书写能够为作文加分,同学们在平时应当有意识加强书写训练。
(注:考研英语写作《写作160篇》――第一本考研英语话题写作)
5. 请问一下考研英语作文应该背那些模板么
7.Sth. is just the same as…/is pared to…/is like…
例句:Life in the middle of marriage if often pared to wire walking, for in the early years spouses attract each other and in late years they need each other.
8.One of the great men o北京哪家考研专业课辅导最好ne said that…/There is an old saying that…
例句:A gifted American psychologist once said that it is an illusion to believe in the Sunday-school truth—more fort, more happiness.
6. 英语图表作文
推荐考研英语写作:【红宝书】考研英语写作(图画+话题)180篇,主要背的是书中经典必背的文章,当然预测部分也有背,快速浏览一些热点话题,这样在考场上你才能写出至少令自己满意的文章来。
以下是个人在写作中摸索的复习方法。 NO。
1 背诵 第三步骤就是背诵:背诵一些经典的话题范文,尽量达到“滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出、多多益善”。 例如文章里的高分佳句,可以选择性的熟记加之模仿,灵活运用到写作中去。
NO。2写作 写作写作,背完之后还是要动笔写!“好记性不如烂笔头”,可以拿考题多加练习。
可以找有范文的题目进行练习,因为这样方便写完后能与范文进行对比。 NO。
3仔细对比 第三个就是仔细对比,写完后对照范文从三个方面去研究:第一个是内容,也就是构思和原文有何区别;第二个是语言,也就是用词、用句和原文有何区别?第三个是结构,就是你的行文思路和原文有什么区别?这是第二个步骤,写作的区别其实就是写作的弱点。 写完一篇之后及时检查文章是否切题,行文是否流畅,有无严重语法错误等,同时通过与范文的比较可以及时发现自己的不足,例如要检查图画内容是否准确地被表达出来,题目所给提示是否完整地反映在文章之中。
NO。4第四个步骤就是默写:背熟后把书合上,把这篇文章默写下来。
默写后,做一个工作:仔细对比原文发现写作弱点,你会发现你默写的文章和原文会有一些出入。包括拼写、语法、标点,这种错误就是你写作的弱点,把这些错误用红笔标出来。
发现自己的错误及时更正,然后自我总结,以免下次再犯。 NO。
5 模仿 第五个步骤就是模仿:什么叫模仿?就是仿写你背过的文章再写出一篇新文章。 在背完一篇文章后,要想想这篇文章有什么精彩的词组、词汇和句型可以使用。
然后换一个话题,把这篇作文用一下,用里面词汇、词组和句型去构思另一篇文章。
7. 考研英语看图作文怎么
看图作文在英语作文中是大家普遍缺乏练习的一种类型,一个提高的方式就是看范例和点评,针对其中的错误进行自我修正。
养老“足球赛”: 写作原文 As is depicted in the picture, a poor old man, rolling like a football, is kicked beeen(改为among,注意beeen和among的区别,beeen表示在两者之间,among则表示在三者或三者以上之间) his three sons and daughter(改为a daughter)。 Unwilling to be responsible for their father ,the daughter and sons spare no effort to kick the old man as far as possible。
We are irritated to see in the picture(建议放到句首或句末) the pathetic fact that these people go to any length to avoid surporting(拼写错误,改为supporting) their parents。 Unfortunately, what we have seen in the picture isn't a rare phenomenon。
However,what factor it is that results in this situation? (汉语式英语,改为what is the cause of this situation?) For one thing, in my opinion, the decreased importance attached to the moral education contributes to the lack of ethnic conception,leading (建议改为定语从句,which leads)to the consequence that paople(拼写错误,改为people) don 't esteem and(改为or,肯定句中用and,否定句中用or) value their parents。 For another, faced with the pressure of work and house installment, young people can hardly make ends meet, let alone taking good care of their old parents who is(改为are,定语从句的先行词为parents,从句中的谓语动词应用are) fragile to a sudden disease such as heart attack。
There is no denying that further attention must be paid to the problem by the government。 To handle this worsening situation, more money should be involed(拼写错误,改为involved) in the pension to guarantee the daily life of old people。
In addition, instead of merely focusing on the scores, schools ought to put more stress on moral education。(结尾较为仓促,可适当添加总结性的话语) 总体点评 考研作文的整体思路你已经基本掌握;但还存在个别简单的语法错误、单词拼写错误及汉语式英语的问题。
建议作者多读、多积累好的词汇及句子;之后可按照佳句进行模仿,以达到用地道的英语表达方式描述自己想法的目的;再者,写完之后一定要认真检查,减少失分点。 参考分数(满分20分):12 英语写作水平的提升需要不断地练习,在改正错误中不断取得进步,不怕犯错误,怕明知道犯错误却不面对。
看了范文和点评,希望大家有思考,有提高。
在日复一日的学习、工作或生活中,大家都不可避免地要接触到作文吧,借助作文可以提高我们的语言组织能力。那么你有了解过作文吗?以下是我为大家收集的英语话题作文7篇,仅供参考,希望能够帮助到大家。
英语话题作文 篇1
Ambition is the decision one makes and the resolution with which he carries out that decision. It provides us with the required driving force to accomplish any undertakings in our life. Just as Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer put it, “And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed.” Indeed, once we make up our minds to choose to do something, then our life becomes meaningful and specifically orientated. This notion of life, as far as I observe, is closest to truth and does apply to almost all aspects of life.
First things first, ambition renders us a sense of mission. No matter what decision you make you have to be responsible for your choice. Your choice procures you a sense of orientation, or more specially a sense of mission. And only a strong mission may enable one to accomplish greatness. Caesar of the ancient Roman Empire was urged by his ambition “I came, I saw, I conquered.” And became an unrivaled empire builder in the history of Rome. John Milton, stimulated always by his ambition that aimed at writing some “mighty lines” which England would unwillingly forget, had in due time secured his position as the second Shakespeare in the history of English literature.
In the second place, ambition can bring one’s potentials to the full. Ambition may well serve as a catalyst activating one’s dormant potentials. Without ambition one’s potentials will remain slumbering like a dormant volcano. A case in point is Ms Zhang Haidi, a Chinese Helen Keller. It was her ambition to be a useful person has turned the almost paralyzed Zhang Haidi into a well-accomplished figure whose achievements would dwarf those of some normal people aim at the sun, though, at worst, they may probably land on the moon.
Influential as it is upon us, however, ambition must be channeled in the right direction. If wrongly directed, one’s ambition may bring havoc on him and others. Hitler, whose ambition was to conquer Europe by whattever evil means, finally turned him into a demon. It was this demon that almost cast Europe into an unfathomable abyss of anguish and suffering. Another case is Macbeth whose ambition was to become the king of Scotland. However, his ambition was materialized by the murder of King Duncan. Consequently, unbearable guilt and psychological agony drove him to his tragic doom.
To sum up, ambition can benefit us tremendously if wisely and correctly channeled, otherwise it may ruin others and ourselves. A poet says: life can be bad; life can be good; life can be dirty; life can be sad,; life can even be painful. In my mind’s eye, a person can make his life beautiful, meaningful and rewarding and stand out as a respectable personage if he is motivated by a well-orientated ambition.
英语话题作文 篇2
This cartoon displays a very soothing scene. An old lady bought some stuff from a convenience store, and just at the moment when she was about to leave, the store keeper ran out to her because she had paid an extra two yuan. Though that is not a big amount of money, I believe the old lady must be greatly impressed by the keeper’s honesty.
It is without doubt that the cartoon aims at addressing a serious problem prevailing in today’s society, that is, the lack honesty in the field of business. For instance, many businessmen are so obsessed with making profit that they simply forget that they are supposed to serve the people with best products and services. Therefore, there emerge fake products, cheating services and unfulfilled promises. In contrast, the kind-hearted keeper of this drawing practices honesty in every detail of her work. Her attitude gives customer the sense that her product and service are of first-class quality, which would guarantee her more customersand credit.
The store keeper’s practice is exactly what we should advocate among all businesses. That is because, honesty not only renders clients temporary satisfaction, but can also build long-term customer trust. The latter is one of the key factors for market expansion and business success.
英语话题作文 篇3
Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ). Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) .
It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ).On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX .
注释:
(1)用具体数据说明XX现象(2)原因一(3)原因二(4)原因三(5)指出主要原因
(6)解决建议一 (7)解决建议二
Generation gap between parents and children
Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75 percentages of parents often complain their children‘s unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned).
Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that ( the two generations,having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) . Besides(due to having little in common to talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face ) . The third reason is (with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they don‘t spare enough time to exchange ideas ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( lake of communication and understanding each other) .
It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (children should respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitue for their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap .
英语话题作文 篇4
Telling Lies
Telling lies is usually looked upon as an evil, because some people try to get benefit from dishonest means or try to conceal their faults.
However,_I_thinkdespitejits_neg1ative_effects,jsometimes_itjisjessentialto iemigsinour_dailylifei First, the liar may benefit from the lie by escaping from the pressure of unnecessary embarrassment. Meanwhile, the listener may also feel more comfortable by reasonable excuses. For example, if a little girl’s father died in an accident, her mother would comfort her by saying “farther has gone to another beautiful land”. In such cases, a lie with original goodwill can make the cruel nice. Second^thejsk^lsjofJtellingJlies^jtojsome extent,canbe_regard_asja_capacity_ofcreationandjimagination.
Therefore,jtakingjallJthese_factor^jntojconsideration,_wecandefinitely come to the conclusion that whether telling a lie is harmful depends on its original intention and the ultimate result it brings. (159 words)
说谎
说谎通常被视为罪恶,因为一些人试图通过不诚实的手段或对自身 缺点的掩盖,从而获利。
然而,我认为尽管有其消极影响,但有时在我们的日常生活中,说 谎是不可避免的。首先,说谎者能借谎言免去一些不必要的尴尬所带来 的压力。同时,听众也会因合理的借口而感到更加自在。例如,如果一 个小女孩的父亲在一次意外中丧身,她的母亲就会安慰她说:“爸爸去 了另一个美丽的世界。”在这样的例子中,善意的谎言能化残酷为美好。 其次,说谎的技巧从某种程度而言可被视为一种创造力和想象力。
因此,综上所述,我们能够得出结论:谎言是否有害,这取决于它 的意图以及最终带来的后果。
英语话题作文 篇5
Our beautiful earth is only one, is also the only one. If you don't cherish, in the end, the only regret. But now, people regardless of the image, the damage to the environment.
In the street, always see someone to walk less, will their garbage on the ground, this kind of behavior is damage to the environment, and not beautiful. Although there is a punishment, but has no effect. In the end, only the cleaner to clean up the mess. That if be in their own homes, garbage, flies are flying everywhere, do you feel better? That if no cleaner in the world, if so do you dare to imagine? Looking at people such behavior, the earth mother cry. Let's ensure that their hand, whether in where, what time, please send their garbage home.
There is a bad behavior, and that is the grass. Every time after school, some children for fun, always likes to play football on the grass. When your foot jump on it, when enjoying the care of the earth, you can know it in complains to heaven. The grass also hurts, it just didn't express. Dew on the grass face every morning there will be some, and the dew like their tears. The grass also have feelings, when it is happy, it will be a purposeful, enjoy the warmth of sunshine, the breeze bath; When it cry, it will be bent her waist; When it is complained that their is a humble grass, it dead. Let's ensure that their feet, don't trample on the lawn. Use action to soothe the soul of the dead, renewed the miracle of life.
Have you seen? Dozens of people saw an axe in hand, they are going to cut down trees. When forests there saw, with the trees fall. When there is a tornado and sandstorms, no trees to shelter from the rain. Then there is no regret medicine to eat. Without trees, also become no longer pure and fresh air. When you're cold, you go to pick up trees make a fire, it is the warmth of your sacrifices for a tree. Some trees grow hundreds or even thousands of years, is a humble axe ended its long life. What a strong tree, I do not know the moment when it fell, it think about? How hardy tree, can eventually escapes according to the bad luck.
Friends, protect our environment, is to protect our earth. Cherish our only the earth, is to cherish our life. When a rainbow sky, means that garbage to go home, the grass smiles, uncle grandpa happy, our earth mother without crying.
参考翻译:
我们美丽的地球只有一个,也是唯一的一个。如果不好好珍惜,到头来,只有后悔。可现在,总有人不顾形象,在破坏环境。
在街上,总会看见有人为了少走几步路,将自己手中的垃圾随意扔在地上,这种行为既破坏环境,又不美观。虽然有惩罚,但一直以来并没有什么成效。到最后,只有清洁工来收拾残局。那假如是在自己的家里,到处都是垃圾、苍蝇还满天飞,你自己好过吗?那假如世界上没有清洁工,要是这样下去你敢想象吗?看着人们这样的行为,地球妈妈哭泣了。让我们管好自己的手,不管是在什么地方,什么时间,请将自己手中的垃圾送回家。
还有一种不好的行为,那就是践踏草坪。每当放学,有些孩子为了开心,总喜欢在草地上踢足球。当你的脚踏在上面蹦蹦跳跳的时候,享受大地关怀的时候,你可知道它在埋怨上天。小草也会疼,它只不过没有表达出来而已。每天早上小草脸上会有一些露珠,而这些露珠就像是它们的眼泪。小草也有感情,当它快乐的'时候,它会挺直腰,享受阳光的温暖,微风的沐浴;当它哭泣的时候,它会弯下自己的腰;当它埋怨自己是颗不起眼的小草时,它已死去。让我们管好自己的脚,别再践踏草坪。用行动安抚已死去的灵魂,再度点燃生命的奇迹。
你看见过吗?几十个人的手里拿着电锯斧头,他们是要去砍伐树木。当森林出现电锯声时,将伴随着一棵棵树的倒下。当出现龙卷风和沙尘暴时,再也没有树木来挡风遮雨。到时再也没有后悔药可吃。没有了树,空气也变得不再清新。当你冷的时候,你去捡树木生火,可你的温暖却是牺牲一棵树换来的。有些树木生长了几百年甚至几千年,可就一把不起眼的斧头结束了它漫长的生命。多么坚强的树,不知当它倒下的那一瞬间,它想到了什么?多么顽强的树,可最终还是逃不过厄运的毒手。
朋友们,保护我们的环境,就是保护我们的地球。珍惜我们唯一的地球,就是珍惜我们的生命。当天空出现彩虹时,就说明垃圾回家了,小草笑了,大叔爷爷乐了,我们的地球妈妈没有在哭泣了。
英语话题作文 篇6
When we were children, we often say that I want to grow up, or I want to be an adult. As children, we cannot do many things, while after we grow up, we can. However, we often complain that I don’t want to grow up when we become adults actually.
当我们还是小孩子的时候,我们常说,我要长大,或者我想成为大人。作为孩子,有很多事情我们都不能做,但是长大后,却可以做。然而,当我们真的长大之后,我们却常常抱怨不想长大。
Firstly, growing up means more responsibilities. We should make a living by ourselves or we should support our parents when they can’t earn enough money to make a living. Secondly, after graduation, we need to work instead of accomplishing nothing. We should have a target and work for it, so we have pressure on jobs. After that, when we meet with the right person, we will get marry with him or her to build a family. That is to say, we have heavier burden because of our family. Building a family and keeping it harmonious is not easy. In a word, there are many problems waiting for us once we grow up.
首先,成长意味着更多的责任。我们要自己谋生,或者在我们父母无法养活自己的时候,要赡养父母。其次,大学毕业后,我们需要工作而不是什么都不做。我们应该有目标,并朝着它工作,因此我们有了工作的压力。之后,当我们会遇到合适的人,我们会和他或她结婚并一起建立一个家庭。也就是说,因为我们自己的家庭,我们的负担加重了。组建一个和谐的家庭并不容易。总之,一旦我们长大了就会有很多问题在等着我们。
Every coin has two sides. Grow up can also broaden our horizon, offer us an opportunity to know more about our world, love and protect the important person in our life. Don’t be afraid of growing up, just be a better person and enjoy our life.
每个硬币都有两面性。长大了可以拓宽我们的视野,使我们有更多的机会地了解我们的世界,爱和保护我们生命中重要的人。不要害怕长大,那只是让你成为一个更好的人,并享受生活。
英语话题作文 篇7
考研英语作文因其所占分值比重大,一直受到同学们的重视,而作文B部分考什么也成为小伙伴们关心的话题。老师今天将和大家一起来探讨下。
1.近十年考研英语作文话题分析
在分析了近十年的作文考题后,文都老师发现:20xx-2014年的大作文是惊人的相似,怎么说?这些年考的都是图画作文,体裁都是议论文,字数为160-200字,分值为20分。其中,20xx年的养老足球赛、20xx年偶像崇拜的思考和20xx年乐观心态是成功的关键,及20xx年合作的重要性,这四年英语作文的题材都是青年面对社会该如何做的相关话题。20xx年的乐观和20xx年的选择也是如此。20xx年网络的近与远和20xx年文化火锅既营养,又美味中的文化不仅指网络文化,也指我国东西方文化交融的现象。20xx年的旅程之余,则是人们多年来一直关心的环境问题,尤其是全球气温回升、自然灾害频发后,这一问题更是得到前所未有的重视。20xx年的相携则是讲述我们都很熟悉的两代关系。
但文都老师要提醒小伙伴们注意的是:当年的热门话题并不一定是当年考研的重点。比如:20xx年的雪灾,很多地区都深受其害,许多百姓流离失所,我们的国家也高度重视,积极进行救助,但这并不是20xx年作文考试的话题。又如20xx年,这一年发生了令人刻骨铭心的汶川地震,无数人在此次地震中家园尽毁,甚至失去宝贵的生命,现场惨不忍睹。国家积极组织救援,并在灾后开展重建工作,全国各地也有无数的自愿者积极参与救助,帮助灾区人民重建家园。但这也不是20xx年考研的话题。如此类推,20xx年有两大重要的、且和我们息息相关的事情,它们成为20xx考研英语作文话题的可能性也不太大。第一,高校职业化。即学术型人才的培养都将由211、985学校承担,而地方性二本及二本以下的院校都将转做职业化教育,这是今后高校人才培养模式变革的方向。第二,严格高考加分政策,取消奥数等的加分,这将有利于建设一个更平等的竞争平台,更有利于促进社会公平。
2.考研英语作文常考话题总结
总的来说,考研英语作文有六大常考话题:⑴健康,如1997,1998年的大作文;⑵两代关系,一共考过3次,即1992,1993,20xx;⑶爱心,1995,20xx和20xx年的小作文;⑷环境,如1999,20xx和20xx年的小作文)⑸青年面对社会,即20xx,2004,20xx,2008;⑹文化,1993,20xx,2009,20xx。也就是说,考研英语作文的话题是人们普遍关注,并具有永恒价值的当代中国社会问题。且考当年热点的可能性不大,都是次热门或中性的话题。
老师相信,如果小伙伴们能够抓住常考话题的本质,认真学习已经考过的范文,并进行融会贯通,灵活运用,作文对你们来说并非难事。因为这些题之前你都学过,都做过,都考过!那么。在考研英语中夺得高分也将会变得易如反掌!
模板一:图画作文来源:考试大 This illustration depicts_________ (图画中的人物)Ving, with______________(补充说明). Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to_____________(进一步阐释) It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题), which is ______________(进一步的说明). He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节). In my opinion, ___________(个人阐述). This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体,如the whole of the human race). Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在). One the one hand, we must _________________(建议一). It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明). On the other hand, ________________(建议二) Only in this way can we___________(展望前景). 模板二:图表作文来源:考试大 The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题). The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点). This means that as __________, _________________(进一步说明). We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一). After ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化), the _____Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化). The figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二). (数据位置,如In the second column), we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述). Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因). / It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议) 模板三:利弊型作文 Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_________. For one thing, __________can bring ____ to_____________(优点一). For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(优点二). But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________, among which are ____________(列举缺点). For instance, it can be __________to _____________(举例说明). In addition, many people find it ________(形容词)to _______________(第二个缺点) When asked to __________, I tend to ____________. This is because I _______________(原因一). Furthermore, _______________________(原因二). Finally, ______________(原因三). 模板四:展望未来型 With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years, ___has____________(引出现象). However, _______ has________________, as____________(提出问题). As a result, _____has ____________________(指出影响). The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones. First , __________________(影响一). More importantly, ________________(影响二). Hence, I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望) There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. The first is that the more(比较级)_____, the more (比较级). In addition, we all agree that________________________(第二个原因)
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